People Should Use Trans Jakarta Bus

Thesis

As we know that the status quo right now in Jakarta, many people have personal car. Because of that, Jakarta always have traffic jam, not only in the morning, but also in the evening everyday. It's very big problem in Jakarta. So, the government makes some ways to solve this problem. One of the ways, they make Trans Jakarta bus which is having a specific line.

Argument 1

People should use the Trans Jakarta bus. Why? Because it can make many advantages for the people who doesn't have vehicles. In the other hands, it can influence the condition in Jakarta. which mean that, Trans Jakarta can change the situation in Jakarta which before have many traffic jam in everywhere, become fluent on the way

The second argument of this text, if the people use the Trans Jakarta bus, they will thrifty the money, because they just cost 3500 rupiahs and they can transit to other place without pay again. And then they don't have to fill the car with gas, which is more expensive than use Trans Jakarta.

Third, if all of the people use Trans Jakarta bus, it will also decrease the polution in Jakarta, because the people always drive their car and ride their motorcycle are decreasing so that the polution will also decrease.

Fourth, when the people has already use the Trans Jakarta bus, it makes the cars and motorcycles in the road decrease, the road will little bit empty and so the Trans Jakarta bus can pass by without the resistor.

Finally, come to my last argument, if the people use Trans Jakarta bus, they will feel more comfort then they use public transportation, motorcycles, and etc. Because the Trans Jakara bus uses air conditioner can fill a lot of people. And if we use the ordinary bus like Kopaja, Metro Mini, bemo, and etc, there a lot of criminals, but not in the Trans Jakarta bus because there is a guard.

So, the conclusion of this text is the Trans Jakarta bus giving us some advantages such as cheap, comfortable, avoid from polution, and avoid from criminality, and make the air of Jakarta is getting better and fresher. And finally, using the Trans Jakarta bus will change the Jakarta's condition. Which full of cars before become fluent and less the fluel using.

So, we believe that people should use the Trans Jakarta bus to change our Jakarta become comfort city.