Illegal Logging is Serious Problem

Thesis

Do you know condition of kalimantan forest ? Now its so deeply saddenes. Whereas a time ago kalimantan forest is well-known with greeness, and luchness. But now its just hectares of barrren land. Its occurs because the act of illegal loggers.

Argument 1

Firstly important effect on the earth is disaster like flood, erosion, land slide, and soon. Its can cause various problems in various sector, especially in the health sector, like can cause various disease : dearhea, tractus respiratory infection, pes, thrauma, and soon. In the traffic sector is traffic jam, road defect, and soon.

Argument 2

Secondly its can to distrub people who live in the area forest because animal who stay in forest will leave forest and attack people how life in the area around the forest.

Argument 3

Thirdly its also occurs high temperature of the world. And its can make ozon decrease and global warming. Whereas effect from global warming is cause a lot of problems, like ice in polar become liquid, sea surface increase, people who live in world will affected various disease like skin disease, respiration disease, and soon.

Argument 4

Finally in the world will shortage lack oxygen because trees as oxygen [O2] saver and CO2 absorber from the sky have died. And when its real humans who live in world will affected various respiration disease like asthma, bronchitis, Tubercholosis [TBC],  and soon.

Reiteration

Illegal logging is to harm for everthing like humans, animals, plants, and everything in the world because its can cause various disaster, ,distrub people who live in the area forest, various disease, global warming, high temperature of the world, and shortage lack oxygen.

Analytical Exposition About Global Warming

Thesis

Everybody should change their way of life to reduce global warming. There are several things that we can do. One of them is by buying and consuming fresh local groceries as much as possible. It of course includes local vegetables, fruits, bread, etc.

Arguement 1

Local groceries don’t need much transportation to get it into the market. It of course means, the amount of carbon dioxide produced is less than the groceries from other region. Therefore, by buying local groceries we are helping reduce the amount of carbon dioxide produced.

Arguement 2

Consuming fresh groceries instead of frozen ones are healthier for us. Furthermore, fresh food or groceries means no requirements for it to be freeze up. It means that no electricity is needed and saving energy means reducing carbon dioxide and money.



Reiteration

So, from now on we should consume fresh local groceries to reduce global warming.

People Should Use Trans Jakarta Bus

Thesis

As we know that the status quo right now in Jakarta, many people have personal car. Because of that, Jakarta always have traffic jam, not only in the morning, but also in the evening everyday. It's very big problem in Jakarta. So, the government makes some ways to solve this problem. One of the ways, they make Trans Jakarta bus which is having a specific line.

Argument 1

People should use the Trans Jakarta bus. Why? Because it can make many advantages for the people who doesn't have vehicles. In the other hands, it can influence the condition in Jakarta. which mean that, Trans Jakarta can change the situation in Jakarta which before have many traffic jam in everywhere, become fluent on the way

The second argument of this text, if the people use the Trans Jakarta bus, they will thrifty the money, because they just cost 3500 rupiahs and they can transit to other place without pay again. And then they don't have to fill the car with gas, which is more expensive than use Trans Jakarta.

Third, if all of the people use Trans Jakarta bus, it will also decrease the polution in Jakarta, because the people always drive their car and ride their motorcycle are decreasing so that the polution will also decrease.

Fourth, when the people has already use the Trans Jakarta bus, it makes the cars and motorcycles in the road decrease, the road will little bit empty and so the Trans Jakarta bus can pass by without the resistor.

Finally, come to my last argument, if the people use Trans Jakarta bus, they will feel more comfort then they use public transportation, motorcycles, and etc. Because the Trans Jakara bus uses air conditioner can fill a lot of people. And if we use the ordinary bus like Kopaja, Metro Mini, bemo, and etc, there a lot of criminals, but not in the Trans Jakarta bus because there is a guard.

So, the conclusion of this text is the Trans Jakarta bus giving us some advantages such as cheap, comfortable, avoid from polution, and avoid from criminality, and make the air of Jakarta is getting better and fresher. And finally, using the Trans Jakarta bus will change the Jakarta's condition. Which full of cars before become fluent and less the fluel using.

So, we believe that people should use the Trans Jakarta bus to change our Jakarta become comfort city.

The Dangerous of Using Drugs

Thesis

Everybody must pay attention of drugs. Drugs are very dangerous for us. Why it is very dangerous for us? Because its can caused harm to our body.

In terms of health, many organs in our body can be harm because using drug. In general, the impact of using drug are can unconscious, make us hallucinate, can harm our nerve, and cause addictive effect. Beside that, using drugs can make the users depressed, liver disease, schizophrenia, blockage of blood vessels, dehydration, optic nerve damage, brain damage, and finally it can cause DEATH!

Argument 1

When viewed in terms of Islamic law, drugs are forbidden. Because it is cause badness, self harm, debilitate. And Islam proscribes all that can cause badness, self harm because it is included zhalim. Also if we using drugs, it means we already do the forbidden things in Islam, it means we sin. So, in terms of Islamic law, using drugs also dangerous.

Argument 2

Furthermore, if the users of drugs are teenagers, it can endanger their future, and endanger their homeland, their country. From the data, 32 percent of drugs users in Indonesia are teenagers, so, if many teenagers –in this case Indonesia- use drugs, it can be endanger this country, harm youth generation, whereas youths are nation expectation. If the youth using drugs, our nation can be destroy!

Reiteration

So, from now on we must pay attention of drugs, because it’s very dangerous, both in terms of health, religion (Islam), nationality and state.

 

The Unhealthy Fast Food

Thesis

Fast food nowadays is considered a normal eating venture. People are not just eating out on special occasions or weekends anymore. It means that all the time they mostly eat fast foods. However is fast food good for health?

Argument 1

Fast food has its popularity in the 1940’s. Within a few years, fast-food operations popped up everywhere. With the compelling rise in fast-food restaurants since the 1940’s, oddly it started the rise in obesity and cancer during that same time period.

 Argument 2

Fast food is highly processed with a wide array of additives. To ensure fast food’s low cost, the fast food products are made with highly-processed ingredients to give it shelf-life, to hold consistency, and to enhance flavor. Fast food is altered from its original healthy form.

 Argument 3

It is not the calories in fast food which damage health and waistline. It is the chemical additives such as aspartame and MSG (monosodium glutamate). Studies show that the chemical additives lead to weight and disease issues.

 

Reiteration

So, there is absolutely nothing nutritional about fast food. Fast food simply feeds hunger and craving.

The Problem of Being Too Fat

Thesis

Being too fat is commonly known as overweight or obesity. It is simply defined as too much body fat inside. Overweight potentially leads high risk of health problem.

Argument 1

Being too fat is recognized as a major factor for heart disease. Due to the overweight, the heart will work harder. It can lead to the heart attack. Furthermore, obesity potentially rises blood cholesterol and blood pressure. In addition, being too fat can change the amount of sugar in the blood. This will cause diabetes and other serous disease.

Argument 2

Beside all of that, being too fat is often avoided by many young women. They said that becoming too fat will bother their physical beauty appearance.

 

 

Reiteration

More serious studies are necessary to see the effect of obesity. However it is clear enough that overweight is not good enough for healthy life.

Laptop as Student’s Friends

Thesis

Conventionally, students need book, pen, eraser, drawing book, ruler and such other stuff. Additionally, in this multimedia era, students need more to reach their progressive development. Students need mobile keyboards to record every presented subject easily. Of course it will need more cost but it will deserve for its function.

Argument 1

First, modern schools tend to apply fast transferring knowledge because the school needs to catch the target of curriculum. Every subject will tend to be given in demonstrative method. Consequently students need extra media cover the subject. Since there is a laptop on every student’s desk, this method will help student to get better understanding.

Argument 2

Secondly, finding an appropriate laptop is not difficult as it was. Recently there is an online shop which provides comprehensive information. The best is that the shop has service of online shopping. The students just need to brows that online shop, decide which computer or laptop they need, and then complete the transaction. After that the laptop will be delivered to the students’ houses. That is really easy and save time and money.

Reiteration

From all of that, having mobile computer is absolutely useful for students who want to catch the best result for their study. Buying laptop online is advisable because it will cut the price. This online way is recommended since online shop also provides several laptop types . Students just need to decide which type they really need.